Blog Post #4
After looking at the revisions made by Dr. Bacabac, I made those quick revisions to my literature review. Most of my mistakes were just aspects that I overlooked while writing. I was using writers first names instead of last and I used six instead of eight sources, so I will be adding two sources that support my topic. The works cited page was and is a struggle for me because I don't necessarily understand why there the databases provides the wrong format of the citation. Aside from that, I plan on extending my outline to complete my rough draft this week. I picked a brand from instagram that I think is equally promoted by the brand itself and sponsors: Curology. By narrowing it down to such an online heavy brand, especially one that is so popular, I can do this research justice. I think that on Tuesday's class, October 25, I will ask more about how it is supposed to be outlined. I know parts of my literature review will be moved around, and I just want to know where and what.
Hi Merika,
ReplyDeleteI also had a few quick revisions that I could add to my literature review. I found myself submitting a paper that seemed to be a little scattered and rushed. I think after adding those quick fixes that you mentioned to my paper as well will ensure a better submitted paper. I really like the idea of you using Curology as a source. Using that brand is one that I think will easily provide research. I personally see that brand consistently as an ad through my feed. I think your revisions are heading in a great direction.
Sounds like you're on the right track! A good source that helps me with MLA Citations is https://www.citationmachine.net/
ReplyDeleteAfter I put in the required information, I use the MLA sheet to double check to see if everything is correct.